pretty loner.

Fri, 08/16/2024 - 15:49 -- lay

She's a pretty loner

Calm, quiet, and always out the way

She doesn’t have many friends 

Maybe because she intimidates people in a way

Maybe its because of her resting bitch face

Maybe its because she was always supposed to just be a loner

Maybe god made her life lonely on purpose

Maybe he thought it should be that way

But she feels like a wasted soul

Sometimes she feels like she’s wasting her life away

She craves human companionship all the time

But she knows people never stay

Tell me how will this pretty loner cope with her feelings of loneliness that suppress her mind day by day? 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

lay

please give me feedback in the comments !!!!!

Adventure_cat

Of course! :D

Adventure_cat

This poem is very good, unfortunately I can relate (was this written about me? haha . . . :')

Also for feedback, hmm perhaps more rhyming and typically I like to have a similar amount of syllables or have a pattern in the amount of syllables for each line to make it sound nice like a rhythm :)

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