Mon, 10/03/2016 - 22:10 -- V.E.

This pain is simply pulling me apartCaught between you and the freedom of hopeThe simple irony of your oath"I promise to let you breathe," Yet your hands are around my neck."I promise to let you see," Still you are all I know."I promise to let you feel." You dulled all my senses Now I am left in a cage.The cage that is my mind, A mind that is no longer my own. It's simply a mind invaded by you. 

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