One With The Stars

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She was whole.

Everyday was words

From the mouths of those around her

Those who she loved

Words

She wasn't good enough

She couldn't do anything right

She never met expectations

She could never fix a mistake

She was fat

She was ugly

She shattered

Into planets

And stars

And meteors

Maybe the pieces of her

Had to grow on their own

To become better for her

So one day she could be whole again

Until then

She is a galaxy

 

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