An Ode to the Ocean
this is an ocean i am not prepared for
i am trying to hang on
grasping at things and people
that float by but
they grab back at me
driving me deeper into the murky waters
where i do not want to go.
this is an ocean i am not prepared for
because apparently,
i cannot swim
as well as i thought i could
and although i teach others not
to be afraid
my body trembles when the waves come
this is an ocean i am not prepared for even though
i am already standing neck deep in it
and the waves are making me dizzy
and i don't see anyone else
and i can't touch the bottom so i forget
exactly what it is i stand for
i am not prepared
but i am here
slapping at the water and taking gulping breaths of air
trying to remember what breathing feels like
for the next time the waves come.
[R]
Comments
Login or register to post a comment.
I like the metaphoric use of the ocean scenery and terms that you employ aptly to poetic effect. It conveys your feel and situation awesomely and creatively wow. Kudos for such poetry.
Pls pleez do comment my newest poem too. Interaction feels warm in this cold world , where we should all be friends.
I both love and hate when poetry is so relatable that it feels like it's describing me... Seriously though, this is well written and is so raw and real through your use of the ocean metaphor. Keep up the good work.