Oceanic

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United States

The sun shined, and the sand burned,

The waves were soothing and calm,

My hair soared while the wind turned,

The hot sand was grasped in my palm.

 

I felt a sensation of unexplainable joy,

I can’t believe a place like this exists,

My mother turned and smiled at me with coy,

Her smile gave me a feel of bliss

 

The light blue water glistened from the sun,

It was gorgeous and magical,

It was the definition of fun,

So pure so angelical.

 

Throughout the day I kept a feel of awe,

My tiny mind still filled with wonder,

I stare and still find no flaw,

I could stay here and forever ponder.

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
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