Notice

Would you notice, that If I gave you my love , would you save your love for me ? Would you cherish the delicate strength or would you let it slip away into anyone's port?

Can you feel what I feel ? The motion sickness, we can't deny. The sweet of my brother and sister at first meeting to find underneath, loud yelling, in my ears, a new voice. A voice telling me, stop, no, enemy, blood, wrong, not her, not him! What is this bond broken, and new glares birthed? Is it because I share love to you, you share love to me, is that what we fear?  that they taste something new on their tastebuds they come to feed our spiritual soup? That they are never full, so are you brave? Can you make it to shore with the shackles around your neck, because i'm still here, can you notice me

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