Nocturnal

Location

36567
United States
30° 38' 36.8376" N, 87° 34' 44.8644" W

(Sometimes) I think
about how we used to be
(I lay) pondering the good times
before you broke my heart
and I was (up)
missing you at all hours
I think about your smile
laugh and voice (and cry)
It all floods my mind
and haunts me (all night)
into the morning
I miss you and it is
tearing me apart
I have put up with it all
(long) enough to kill anyone

Comments

maymay514

I wrote this poem about my boyfriend of four years who broke my heart into a million pieces.

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