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31° 23' 44.7396" N, 110° 11' 16.4796" W

do you remember that night
the night we felt something new
were you there in the moment
or were you checked out too

would this of become a fact
if the hook wasn't set to bait
with the promise so abstract
Leading me more than anything to hate

he doesn't know the truth
i don't know if he'd blame me
or if he'd blame you
why did we do this
how did we fall in
into the bed that makes boys men

will we ever talk about this
do you even care?
did i really even miss
what could happen when one dares

I took that chance
I made the choice
to pursue and advance
in the midst afraid to use my own voice

Things that feel so right
Were in fact wrong
you've just gotta hit the brake light
instead of that awkward so long


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