The Moment.

I just want you to notice me
I'm hurting uncontrollably
Is this how it's supposed to be
Are you ever gonna get close to me
It's stabbing at my soul 
And i feel the cuts that start to bleed
Why is it so hard to see
Why is it so hard to breath
I'll given you everything you need
I just want a little support for me
I've swam across the coldest sea
Now kneeling on both my knees
With all of my pride now left aside
This is the moment were I survive or die.
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