Menace

I move on tracks
like running backs
smoke niggas like 20 sacks
get bent like hunch backs
any questions just ask
why, what or where
nobody can compare
stay hot like my name was
Texas electric chairs

Comments

jwiener

12 years ago

You used a number of similes in this poem, which is a great technique for poetry writing, because in addition to telling your story, you add figurative language to make it have a bigger impact.