Love

Location

Clear lake
Po box 133
United States

Love
Is what we want and what we need,
It makes us hurt and makes us bleed,
And gives us strength to go on;
But causes pain when its gone
It gives us hope it gives us rest
Sometimes it makes us so depressed
The cost of love u will know
When my emotion doesnt show
Thats the price of beong a father
What did u say? Dont even another

This poem is about: 
Me
My family

Comments

Annette M Velasquez

Interesting, expressive and with a nice flow... The ending seemed a bit abrupt, though.

Spider_007

Thaml you its suppossed to say bother instead ifanother.. I actually had written this poem over 10years ago.. Sokeone plagurized my work.. So ik re writing it.. Ill be posting lots more poels so please stay "in tune"

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