Let Me Straddle Your MIND

Let me straddle your mind
Let me lay on top of your thoughts
Rubbing & caressing each care away
Interrupting them with each touch & feel
I can open you up, to love, lifting you up
Giving you a high
Past the feels, past the “trees”,
Past the clouds, & past your past
Let me feel you, because I can feel you
Every hope pain and moment in happiness
Can we ride each other? giving the most intimate feeling
Like I’ll ride with you, and you ride with me
Being so deep inside each other
Feeling every single emotion
So much that oh my! I think I just kissed your conscience

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