Killing me softly with his song

Fri, 02/21/2014 - 21:34 -- Jeevin

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A song so moving I felt revived
 
the rhythm made my senses alive
 
A voice and instruments in a symphony 
 
the connection to the lyrics gave out my sympathy 
 
To the artist whose lyrics dug deep so significantly 
 
The message answered everything causing an epiphany 
 
he sang the story of my life and I wanted him to go on
 
the truth of his words Ied me to hold on
 
gripping the intro ,bridge ,chorus ,and verse
 
The story he spoke were exactly like my words
 
he put everything on the line to sing something I could feel
 
each note stung my heart for the pain I heard was real 
 
strumming his soul out and speaking seducingly as I was listening
 
his song answered every question I came across through his singing
 

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