KEY

Location

There's this key to success so recogonize where your looking

Your busy trying to find it on your own

While everybody else is busy cooking

NO! It's not under the couch

They are shouting and eating

Why can't you stop looking for that damn thing

Success for you doesn't end on the weekend

Now your'e 30 years old

I notice you hungry and weeping

Doctors try to warn you

Look at the scars on your feet

Girl your tired ass is beat

Take me by the hand 

Yes I got what you need

All it took was patience baby girl

Now here's that key

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