Tue, 04/09/2013 - 19:52 -- toocat


United States
43° 25' 28.1712" N, 76° 28' 45.9984" W

Hello I say,
To the darkest part of my mind
As I'm hidden away from the world.

Consumed by depression
And taken over by negative thoughts
On how I could be better

Hello I say,
To the loneliness I endure
When you are not here.

And I cannot help
But to think of what it would be like
If you were here.

Hello I'd say,
If I traveled
Down to where you are.

Where I could hold you
And whisper all the things
That I love about you.

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