Freind on Freinds

Wed, 03/26/2014 - 11:32 -- Geovany

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Freinds keeps us sane in this world.

They were faithfull durng childhood, unplanned.

They kept us away from famiy dinner tables.

The rules of friendship should be rewritten.

No responsiblites, no time, and no life goals to stop it.

If only for adulthood, it could be written that way

 

New black Cadillac, business attire, on my way to a meeting.

Walking past people like ants in a colony.

Making friends that never lasts.

That number diminises with success.

I propose a simple change to human nature.

Friends are made when you put in the efforts.

 

Those who do put in the effot

never has any friends.

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