Mon, 09/24/2012 - 20:05 -- Gary101

Fresh green leaf turn red
The hot air turn slightly cold
Fall is coming soon



A nice haiku structure. I like how you work with dualism in the first two lines: green and red, hot and cold. It very simply underscores autumn's liminality.

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