The Eternal clock

Tic toc tic toc 

your time is almost up

you lost your way 

you've lost this fight 

now find a way

to live one more night  

Comments

upnorthdavid

5 years ago

I love this piece...great rhythm to it...leaves me wanting more!

Kailee Baffield

5 years ago

thankyou you should look at my other poem dissapointed it should leave you asking questions

 

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