They crack me open like a book

Saying the doctors want to take a look.

Their all shocked at what they find

as my internal world begins to unwind


They see it all.

I'm vulnerable

They see my past of hurt and  pain,

but even better they see the hope I claim.


They see my dreams and future ahead

as all my walls are shed. 

A beautiful beginning unfolds



Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.


If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741