Dear Summer:

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

i thank you for another season
when i can wear my nike air uptowns and polo shirts
looking proper like the words use in a paragraph
though i have to watch my back for goons around the corner plotting
thank you for the spirits of the sun glowing brighter than a person with no sensibility
have to be careful of heat waves that are stronger than a person's bad breath
to be able to take a tan on the beach
just got to make sure i dont get burn like someone having unprotected sex
its nice to take a romantic walk by the docks
make sure people dont litter on the rocks
enjoying a time to have fun in the picnic
just hope it dont turn into a battlefield over a game of cards
Dear summer

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Comments

jwiener

Everyone has a favorite season, and it was nice how instead of just writing about why you enjoy summer, you constructed this poem as if you were actually writing a letter to summer itself because it added another dimension to the poem.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

everybody does have a favorite season
i wanted to construct a different style to it because lots of events happen during the summer
thanks 4 the support

Imani Sophia

that's the nuyorican cafe! 

Awesome piece. It definitely reminds me of the summertime in New York, uptown style in the boogey down bx

 

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i'm very grateful that you enjoyed my piece

i performed at nuyorican cafe although its been months ago

check out my other poems and provide me feedback

 

Zion Omina

I love this

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Thank you 

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