Cousin Richard

Location

Norfolk, Virginia, United States (place of inspiration...)
United States

Who said I is inside?

Oh! I wish IT wasn’t!

 

Put IT up in a tree

Or on a clothing line

There in sultry Hampton.

 

Hang IT up to dry with all our tears

In sweltering Hanoi.

 

(The air was thick everywhere IT went. You could almost say suffocating…)

 

If IT can’t make it in light

We’ll remember IT otherwise

 

IT is a name and a belief.

IT is a conception of a thing.

IT was moving, breathing, and

Bearing form

 

It has since broken down

 

IT can be missed. 

IT can shape meaning.

IT can dance in echoes and strange instances.

 

When gunsmoke rose it made breathing room for

Growing breathless

 

The roar of bombs rang out in memory

—Mind, moment, a series of mirrors IT passed by—

And in the blackened earth

What’s there to gain

But the sick ease of sucking down poison?

 

—Permeate. Waxing. Turning blackness.

The empty spaces where your life remains.

Holes in the world here or there, in Virginia or Vũng Tàu—

 

Those mosquitoes hover in the moonlight,

Slowly descending to the source of

An inanimate scream dissolving in the air,

A void made where IT, faces and names

—Fond thoughts beyond all farewells— 

Kissed God

 

This poem is about: 
My family
My country
Our world
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Comments

Vincent St. Clare

This poem is one I wrote ca. 2013, shortly after a trip southward, down the U.S. East Coast to the vicinity of Norfolk, Virginia. There[abouts], a meeting with "long-lost" extended family included a very brief introduction to a distant cousin who sadly passed before I could ever see him again...

** … 𝘼 𝙡𝙞𝙩𝙩𝙡𝙚 𝙙𝙚𝙫𝙤𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙩𝙤 𝙖 𝙢𝙖𝙣 𝙬𝙝𝙤 𝙖𝙥𝙥𝙚𝙖𝙧𝙚𝙙 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙖 𝙥𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙩𝙤𝙢 𝙩𝙤 𝙢𝙚, 𝙬𝙝𝙤𝙢 𝙄 𝙖𝙩 𝙤𝙣𝙘𝙚 𝙠𝙣𝙚𝙬 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙣𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙠𝙣𝙤𝙬… **

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