The Clouds Winked at Me

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I'm amazed every day by the things you do....

When all goes wrong ..I lift my head and look to you

For all the things you've gotten me through

i knowest not what else to do?

But from time to time, I stay away remember you only when nothing goes my way

Then make false promises that you and I know I cant keep

And once delivered fall back in waist deep, ten knoweth not what else to do.  But lift my head and call to you

For I only remember to be Christian when things are wrong

But I promise God I will change for good.

Change everything my life, surroundings, everything, I promise!!

Just deliver me ONE…..LAST…..TIME….

Then I said a litter prayer maybe half meaning it, as I usually do…

But who else could I turn to?

But I’m to blinded in my ignorance to really open my eyes and see…..

And as I lifted my head to look to God…the Clouds formed a face…..and it smirked….and then winked at me…

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