Is my mind so unoriginal,

it can't think in another way?

My thoughts have turned sappy

Since he came around that day.


I love him, I love him

He loves me too.

I want this for forever

and I want to marry you.


So what, my mind rebutted to me

He asked you to come out and play.

Then I decided to forgive my mind,

for being so perfectly cliche.



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