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46° 54' 30.7728" N, 68° 9' 26.7696" W


suddenly stops my world

hearing your words

this is a reaction

hope there is satisfaction 

difficult to believe

that being better can be achieved

but that is our only direction

up, skies limitation

tried and failed, countless

but always with him, success

i am stuck in a possible disgrace

between a rock and a hard place

only time can cure

but the time seems endless for sure

while i am with an unknown fate

there is no need to create

another chance

one day if not by happenstance

it will be given

if not i will find a way again

so until then, honest

your chance is waiting, i promise


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