Burnt and Burning

Fri, 06/16/2017 - 00:31 -- Savat61

Obviously you don't see the world hurting

Broken down, burnt and burning

Stuck to the gorund like dying trees,

the people need to be free.

 

No one really cares,

but go ahead and share.

All your talk of change,

only really causes mange.

 

If only there was no war.

Then maybe the world won't hurt anymore,

though it could still be a little sore.

Come and open the door!

 

Obviously you don't see the world hurting.

It's broken down, burnt and burning.

But together we will try,

and learn not to cry;

forever we will strive!

This poem is about: 
Our world

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