Bully

You see me walking in the halls,

I dont know why you make me fall.

On the inside and out you break me down,

But they still treat you like the class clown.

Its not funny the way you make us feel, 

And we're here now to break the seal.

You wont hit me with your words again,

So one more time I hit this paper with pen.

 

 

 

Comments

GIOMNAT

I really like your use of words, especially the rhyming words. You chose powerful ones that convey the message briefly but effectively.

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