Breathless

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The way you leave me breathless,

I knew this form the start.

So here's to us, saying,

Until Death do us part.

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Bazzaro127

10 years ago

Form is from, just saying. But I love the way these short few words help describe so much love and passion from beginning to end;) Awesome poetry!!! Ill keep reading more of your poetry, so I can learn more hah

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