Blue Betty

Blue Betty,

can you hear me?

Twinkling Jingles,

are sinking in the sea.

 

Blue Betty,

can you feel me?

Lost in Atlantis

Osiris tell me how could this be?

 

Broken Neptune,

Fading color,

Bleeding maroon,

The Mother

 

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Blue Betty,

 

I know you're floating somewhere

Holding your breath

Slate eyes are leaking a prayer

 

Blue Betty,

we see that life isn't fair

The pressure is lower down there

so please just be aware

 

Melancholy skies,

Ocean waters,

Pacific eyes,

The Daughter

 

 

 

 

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