Blame the Beer


stumbling, slurring

on the wet grass

kissing him

hitting him

fire snaps, crackles


6 am cock crow

sandwiched between 

blue velveteen 

and James Dean

Get an advil, please


Take inventory 

this is your life

unannounced intervention 

snap shot late night

reads black



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