Once there gone

Wed, 03/07/2018 - 20:51 -- Jvega

Once you're by yourself you're alone

You don't have anyone to call your own 

You're sad and lonely 

You wish you weren't the only 

You wish you had someone with you all times 

You're depressed and need a friend in your life 

When you're alone your life stops 

On your knees you drop 

Then  you pray for your love ones 

When will the sadness be done!! 

 

Comments

Jvega

marco jimenez: your poem was great you did a great job!

Jvega

jose cisneros/ you did a good job and good work 

 

Jvega

That was sad, but it was still good.-Geraldine

Jvega

you did a really good job!-Blanca

Jvega

nice job i really like your peom-jessica

Jvega

it rhyme veary well-victor

Jvega

This is good and sad if you feel like this i am sad-javiervelasco

Jvega

I like how you rhymed. -Erika

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i liked your rhyming nick.m

Jvega

I like you used examples of people having depression and that we NEED to stop it. ~ N.O.

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