If I died tonight

If I died tonight
what did I leave behind.
Did I leave a spark for someone else to find
Did I shine my light
for the world to see Jesus Christ through me..
Or did I fake it all
just for the love of me
Did I give it all just to be like him,
Did I lose it all to really die for him
No I lost myself to the to the point of no return,
I failed cause I decided to neglect Your very word
of your life for me
why couldn’t I see?
Everything in life you sacrificed it all for me

*Did I leave behind obstacles of despair
for you to struggle.
Did I lost the very precious gift
of being so humble..
My pride and joy
was within myself,
no time for connection
cause I was disconnected
No time for you
All the time for me
I couldn’t, wouldn’t
see someone in need..

Would you tell how I won’t focus on me

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this is poem about finding oneself

i hope you found yourself, your drive, your purpose in this world

your time is not up

find the reason why you are here in this world

poetry has give you the chance to express yourself proudly and honestly

well done

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