This Feeling

There’s no way to find, this feeling inside.
I want it to shine, don’t want it to hide.
I want it to show, I want it to grow.
Don’t want to be shy, I want to give it a try.
To tell you how I really feel.
You needed like a everyday meal.
And how you can’t break me because my heart is made out of steel.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

poem the way i understood sounds like you are strong
your heart is not made out of steel, your heart is warm
dont allow anybody to bring you down
great job-keep writing
im a power poetry mentor

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