Poems from Madeline71100

I'm from California. I love any form of writing but my favorite is poetry. I'm 15 years old. I get a lot of comments about being so young but I don't think your writing should be judged on what you look like, how old you are, etc. Instead it should be judged on the emotion that lives in the writing. I've only been writing poetry for about two years now. I started after my dad passed away and I've slowly improved since then, however, I still have much to improve on. That's a huge majority of why I'm on here. So, Please let me know any advice or suggestions you may have. Thank You.
It all seems to be a simple melody, one that flows quite peacefully, a soft whisper in the whirling storm, and silence of unrequited love...
Settle down butterfly, one more wish and maybe you'll fly. Days on end with no hope again, realizations over, just continue to flutter in...
Mishaps turn into decisions, They leave the head ridden, Thinking and pondering.  These stars were once bright, Until the land fell from...
When we are left empty, lying on the floor, the only way to have hope, is to picture a face you adore.   But, sometimes it simply is not...
The smile on my lips, its pure bliss.  But you burned my heart, and now it won't function right.   I tried to hope that we had it, I can'...

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