your eyes soaked up my ocean

Wed, 01/31/2018 - 20:10 -- KL

dear the one who feels like home

 

when we were together

you looked straight into my ocean of a heart

and relieved me of some of its weight

some of its noise

 

you looked straight in and soaked it up

maybe thats why I wasn't drowning when I was with you

maybe that's why your eyes are so blue

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