You

Location

You're a rope dropping down from my sky;

The color of Extraordinary

I stare into your eyes,

As into a crystal ball,

But I can't find Forever

I can't believe anything in this uncertain world

Can feel this Right

And Real

And True

Its NEVER enough

But WAY too MUCH

I feel your soul

As it shines through like Sun rays

You are a Golden Child

You're Special

But NOT Special enough

As I look up to my sky

I imagine you up there

Not like a cloud

Or a bird

Or a star

As a Sun that is DULL

You are somewhat BRIGHT

But NOT bright enough

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