A world where.....

When incorrect feelings cloud my thinking and it feels into darkness im sinking i just see a world where....
where Cain had never did it, he tried to lift the rock but in his soul he felt convicted
told his brother maybe we should grab a bite and God can show me how to sacrifice
the assyrians went throughout the land giving gold to the poor
and the babylonians never once had went to war
Athens gave spartans the credit they deserved and together they planted libraries throughout the earth
Lions werent hostile, no romans to seize those that preach the gospel
in fact, 90% of em became apostles.
Crusaders didnt exist, muslim soldiers didnt either.
They all were interested in wisdom like the queen of Sheba
but it didnt need to be looked for, everything was there.
it was there forever to the point no one was scared
no discouragement, no one even knew what courage meant.
the brain had no way of being denied nourishment
Genghis Khan became a poet
mansa musa invented rap
and when the portugese landed in Africa it was just to give them dap
the natives werent massacred, blacks were never brought here
the mali empire was still flourishing even after years
John wilkes shot Lincoln with a water gun
world peace I had just begun.
And saudi arabia had a ruler that was a female one
America couldnt equip terrorists, no one ever saw a gun.
mujahadeen became a charity helping those without no funds.
the word "crack" was used only as a verb
unless you talking bout the one on a wall or on the curb
911 wasnt needed and it never happened either.
no crime to stop, and towers just got higher.
Iraq became an arts center, Bush was at the opening
by now you get the point im sure ive said enough before i leave.
I never said Adam and Eve didnt eat the fruit
i never said that evil never had taken root.
It was there but we all rejected it with the same spirit.
put it in perspective so it becomes clearer
its not too late to make it happen
we can make it a reality
but you gotta be willing to let your voice become the caval...ry


This poem is about: 
Our world


Jan Wienen

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