Will you remember?

Location

81501
United States
39° 4' 30.2124" N, 108° 33' 8.1108" W

As senior year draws to an end

I look at each and every friend 

some moving away 

some planning to stay

we will all move on 

to start our lives on our on

to break some family ties 

with a tear in our eyes

to leave some friends behind 

keeping all the memories in our mind

we may leave this place

but in our hearts there will always be space

 

Comments

the illusions of a fairytale_nicoli

I really liked how you ACTUALLY captured the word "hurt" in love and moving on. (claps)

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