Who do I say,

Do I say that I am?

What am I now,

Am I now that I was?

When will it be,

Will it be truly me?

Where does this end,

Does this end with a dream?

Oceans rolled,

Storms approached,

I died in the cold,

A lost, broken soul.

Pieces of me,


All I could see

Were the blind men running.

Their attempts to provide,

For a future not yet coming,

Spoke frozen lies

To the heart I was becoming.

And then-

Only then!

Now - only now do I see

My face has been covered;

It’s too hard to breath.

Don’t break me out

Break me out of silence,

Because this

Ice, cold and frozen





The slow break,

The easy descent

Into finally,



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