When You're Gone

I wish I could love you more
While you're still alive
But I get an eerie feeling
I'll love you more
When you're gone

Comments

TamingOfSeaWolves

7 years ago

this is well written, short and sweet like a quiet thought passing breifly on the edge of your mind well done.

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