When it Rains

Location

Florida
U.S. Virgin Islands

Can’t you the feel the rain?

Can’t you see the tears the stars cry at night,

under the moon light?

But only you can stop the rain,

Only you can soothe the pain,

and turn the night into day.

Only you can turn a spark to a flame.

And transform a flame to blaze.

Only you can patch the wound,

That the earth bleeds,

When it rains.

 Through it all,

The  velvet  greens of the earth,

Can produce red velvet blossoms with,

Daggers along the handle?

While the senile wise woman sings,

“ You see a rose is just a rose,

But baby girl,

you’re still a flower,

She hasn’t been torn and ripped apart,

Haven’t gone through real pain,"

 But when the metamorphosis  is complete,

She’ll have her thrones to prove it.

A sweet vitriolic tongues; 

Charmer.

Indolent fool;

Incumbrance,

Protect your purity;

Temple.

When it Rains;

It pours

When it Rains:

It soothes.

When it ceases;

It'll be okay.

 

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