WHAT WENT WRONG.

Location

Kumasi-Ashanti Region
Kronom Afrancho
Ghana

Yearning to become someone better,
That is one wish all children make.
But what happens?
When some wishes
Turn into ashes;
Without even trying.
Then all get lost.

How mysterious when hopes
Turn into silly jokes,
When faith fades away and
There's no other last time,
For you to settle what went wrong.

This poem is about: 
My community
Our world
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Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Greatly written! Very moving poem. 

Precious Oppong

Thank you, all my desire is to see a spark of change.

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