What Makes Me Tick

What makes me tick
More like what makes me think
About knowing the unknown
Or why girls are associated with the color pink
 
Random scenarios make me tick
Forcing me to think about what could be
Stepping out from this fake world
I can ponder upon pure reality
 
But what is reality?
A person’s altered state of mind
Or social norms that we have somehow accepted
Into controlling mankind
 
But what exactly controls mankind?
Money? Fame? Debt? Shame?
All seems to be material
And who's to blame
 
That’s the ultimate question
That makes my mind tick
Who's to blame for the tragedy of the world
Because I am not the tribute you will pick
 
But I volunteer myself as a tribute
To question the obvious and always ask why
To find the little pieces that make the big picture
And to keep ticking until my clock has died

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