What I Would Change

What would I change? 

Why change anything in this wonderful world?

Oh wait. I know what I would change.

What would I change, you might ask?

I would change the military requirement laws.

Why would I change those, you might ask?

That way my little brother can live out his dream,

That way my little brother can enlist,

That way my little brother can feel as if he has served his country,

That way my little brother can do what he feels is his duty.

What would you change?

 

 

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