The Wave

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Powerful, Heavy, Fun You're sitting on your board You feel like a knight with his sword Then you see something on the horizon It comes in like a steaming train Your mind is telling you to refrain But something else changes your mind Pretending the wave will be so kind The Wave is roaring Yet you keep going You're in position And are not going to give in, It is just about to break You paddle, paddle, paddle As hard as you can, You push up and stand Hoping you don't go crashing into the sand But you prevail Not a chance that you will fail Going down the line You pull into the barrel It's a whole different world inside the tube The wave seems like it is going to close out So keep going along the route You see the exit ahead It is in your sight So you go with all your might And it's time to shout Because you made it You finally made it!

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