Watergrave Quietude

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Swimming is fun,

Until you start drowning 

Life is like swimming under the ocean 

You enjoy every little thing you see,

Depression is like drowning 

It starts to divilitize your life ,

You feel like no one can rescue you

You start growing comfort into the darkness,

drowning is like depression you can't scream 

because no one will hear you,

you start to overthink life,

Life is then over.

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