Waterfall

Washing clean the rocks in A rainbow of thick moisture spraying off into the opaque depths Tangled streams of rain rushing quicker than gravity Eloquence of beauty translated into the speech of Roaring mist and pounding spray that careens into pool bottom with Force that shifts the pebbles And curls into current under itself Lunging, laughing, whirling wild, Lake in motion strikes the brittle surface with deafening thunderclap

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Megan DeVries

Is there a way I can make this read like an acrostic, or are all the lines going to be continuous with no line breaks? I've tried editing, but it doesn't seem to be working.

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