Walking on my Own

Walking on my OWN;

I can see clearly,

The rain drops on the leaves,

The way they fall so quickly,

The explosion of the drop when it smashes on the cold concrete

The rays of the sun;

The way the beams reflect off of my eyes

Relaxation beyond my wildest dream;

Like nothing can stop me,

Having people around me 

Is a good time as well

But being able to walk on my OWN,

The feeling is unbeatable. 

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