Virgin Killer (HELL BOUND)

Tue, 06/05/2012 - 16:53 -- grlaqm

Are you proud?
Proud to know that you forcibly took the one thing that meant the world to me
You think your mother is smiling?
Smiling at the fact that you had no remorse for what you did
Your a disgrace to the world
And that thing you call YOLO? You only live once?
More like You obviously lack originality
I bet this ain't your first time
Probably got records on Google or America's Most Wanted
Click, Click, Click
Well look here your on probation
Does your parole officer know you slippin?
Or are you just waiting for the day you get caught like the rest of em
I best your father can see through those eyes
Transparent and dishonest
I should've known that mouth of yours would be full of bullshit
But I fell
I fell hard
Hard enough to fall on the bed when you said I loved you or I missed you
Hard enough to let your dick slide into me when you wanted to get it in
I was naive
A child who wanted nothing more than someone to love me
Nothing more than protection or even just a friend
I didn''t know you had games
You sure did play your cards well
I'm the loser who seems to have been confused by the joker
But I'm not one to judge
It's not my job
God is the true jury of this case and he's reached a verdict
Your guilty of being a virgin killer
I hope he declares you HELLBOUND

Comments

jwiener

This is such a strong poem. I respect the fact that you are brave enough to write about your true feelings, because that is what makes not only a great poet but a true, mature person as well.

grlaqm

This isn't about me, I just decided to write about rape in a womans point of view. This poem is receiving a lot of credit though but anyways thank you very much. I'm only a beginner so I really didn't think much of this but people seem to love it.

jwiener

It's amazing that you can put yourself in someone else's shoes, or imagine how you would react in a certain situation without having been through it yourself. You are a wonderful poet since you are able to write in such a way that speaks to so many people.

ArielMoriahMaryDouglas

So powerful

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