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I breathe in air so carefully created,

I think of life so weary and jaded.

But my hope will rest in the One above,

Who despite my sin continues to love.

 

Continues to love the man forgotten,

Continues to love the earth He Begotten.

For every hair on every head,

For every one He forgivingly bled.

 

He forgivingly bled for all to see,

He chose to hang with humility.

Unconditional love He gives to all,

But in our sin we continue to fall.

 

We continue to fall from His great grace,

But I choose to fall into his embrace.

For every day and every night,

I embrace His sweetness and His light.

 

His sweetness and His light will make me anew,

From the evil and dark I finally withdrew,

I breathe in this air so carefully created,

I think of my life now newly upgraded.

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