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It was love at first sight
Infatuated with your outer beauty
I fell hopelessly at your mercy.
Your words were mesmerizing
and I hung on to them.

Created a world
Where we could escape reality and live out our fantasies
Sadly, reality couldn't match it.
I couldn't grasp it!
Living in a world far from reality
Slowly I was losing my sanity.

Infuriated at myself
For I had set my heart up.
I let you lead me on,
but this mustn't carry on.
For my sanities sake
I must return to reality. . .
A world that knows nothing of your love; where you and I will never be.

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unspokenbeauty12

I would really love to hear your replies to my poem(s) I've always liked poetry and I'm looking to better myself, so I look forward to all the constructive criticism. B R I N G I T lol (^.^)

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